"The Sea Inside" painting by Samy Charnine
Happy Saturday Musers! Hoping you all are doing well, and staying safe. Here is a surreal painting for your musing pleasure.
Ponder the painting / write / link / & visit others along the way.
Have fun everyone!
Happy Saturday Musers! Hoping you all are doing well, and staying safe. Here is a surreal painting for your musing pleasure.
Ponder the painting / write / link / & visit others along the way.
Have fun everyone!
where were you when the clouds
ReplyDeletesuddenly opened to blue above our heads
like the top of an aquarium
and the Sun God sprinkled light
over our heads, fish food brilliantly sparkling,
drifting down to reflect off the ocean and sand,
and our eyes swam up, greedy, hungry
for it all, our mouths an "Oh!" and trying to sip
what was beyond even the surface,
what was hidden by the pool of sky,
waiting again for tomorrow
Captured the image in poetry ~ perfectly.
DeleteThis is a gorgeous representation of the painting Qbit! Poetry at it's finest!
DeleteGood morning everyone!
DeleteGood morning Qbit!
DeleteI love the inversion here. You've turned the world topsy turvey, qbit. I think I'll just hang by my knees from the celestial trapeze.
DeleteBeautiful interpretation of the image
DeleteGood Morning
DeleteGrowing gills to breathe in the air
hoping the angel(fish) will hear our prayers
our words bubbling from a place of depth
inhaling/exhaling with each breath
gbit - these words just seemed to flow
much like your poem...thank you
Yes!
DeleteHappy writing everyone! Looking forward to reading your words! Qbit has started us off beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carrie for hosting. My write doesn't deserve first on the list but I'm finished with poems for a while, go get dressed for the day now...
ReplyDeleteGlad you are here Jim. I enjoyed your poem very much! Have a great weekend!
DeleteGood morning, poets! I see qbit is up ahead of us today!
ReplyDeleteIt was sunny, there was coffee. Poetry stirred in me like lowfat half-and-half and sugar.
Deletecrack for poets!!!
DeleteLowfat crack! Heart healthy!
DeleteHey Shay! 🤩
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ReplyDeleteIntriguing I must say .......
ReplyDeleteThat's what I said when I found it. Glad to see you Helen!
DeleteYipes. I had a similar dream a couple of months ago..
ReplyDeleteYou should turn your dream into poetry Toni!
DeleteWOW! qbit! Your poem is so fantastic it made me embarrassed about my own. But sometimes silliness is okay. I love everything about your poem. It is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThey are both wonderful in their own ways Sherry! Always glad to see you here!!
DeleteYes to that!
DeleteOh, I hope we're getting closer to the world letting us play outside again. Suffering cabin fever
ReplyDeleteI completely understand Susie! I have been quite stir crazy for a while now.
DeleteGood Morning Dear Poets!
ReplyDeleteMy muse was amused by the photo today, so I had to swim to the surface and catch a verse or two.
Hello Truedessa it is wonderful to see you here! Glad you swam on over.
DeleteIt's become Sunday evening here before I had some time to write. Looking forward for some time to read when the kids are in bed. :-)
ReplyDeleteSo glad you join us RedCat heading over to read yours now.
DeleteI'll be back to read, I promise!
ReplyDeleteIt is wonderful to see you here Susan! I hope your week is going okay and you are staying safe.
Deleteqbit, look in your spam folder for my comment, as usual. I am the spam spork in the gears, it seems.
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